Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Response to “The Men We Carry In Our Minds"

Sanders’ essay describes women as victims, which is not how I would describe women during the time period. I agree with Sanders’ that women, in any period of time, do strive to be everything and do everything, I consider it a woman’s nature. Married women, especially during the late 1940s and 1950s, had priorities that were viewed similar to a male’s job. The priorities could have been cleaning or cooking, but that doesn’t make the work less superior than a man’s job. However, a woman wasn’t able to receive additional education as easily as we are now. The women attending college in the mid 1960s were from wealthy, powerful families striving to carry on the legacy that the men in her family established.
Sanders’ title says it best, “The Men We Carry In Our Minds,” is the generalization of a working man, that young men will strive to be one day. Living up to the title, Sanders’ envisioned a difficult life for himself by becoming similar to the men he knew, struggling laborers with aging bodies and families to care for. Sander’s was able to break the mold by attending college. The women he met there enlightened Sanders to the realization that he had been confined to the small town attitudes from where he was raised. I have alternate views then Sanders, pursuing additional education was expected to be in my future as a child. Sanders’ essay described his realization of his small mindedness he was oblivious to, I support with the topic of Sanders’ essay, small mindedness is intolerable ignorance.

3 comments:

  1. You responded to this essay very well. It flowed and you stated your thoughts very nicely. The info was good. The way you involved the time lines of the decades when Sander's wrote about it added some more info. You tighed in what he was saying and had a nice transition to your own experience or views at the end. This response was understandable and knowledgable.

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  2. I like your response to Sander's essay. I like how you stuck to one side and did not travel back and forth as he did. I also like how you did research on the topic to find the different dates about the women. Also, did not find any fallacies in your essay.

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  3. I really enjoyed reading you response to Sander's essay. I got a clear view of what he was trying to state. I also understood what you were trying to say as well! Good job!! And there were no fallacies as I could tell!

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